I am a student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ.
Hay Christiaan.I realy liked how you put a lot of different images i you creature making it very uniqe and making people slow down to see all of it.I dont realy think you need to add anything so yeah keep up the good work.Cooper.B
really good writing and real great idea but a few sentences could well, should be re-wrote.ha look I put "well," y,know I told you to put the ","
Hi Christiaan I like your nonsense creature its funny you added a creeper face on it and human feet and the eyes moveing every where. Slaine.G
Hay Christiaan.
ReplyDeleteI realy liked how you put a lot of different images i you creature making it very uniqe and making people slow down to see all of it.I dont realy think you need to add anything so yeah keep up the good work.
Cooper.B
really good writing and real great idea but a few sentences could well, should be re-wrote.
ReplyDeleteha look I put "well," y,know I told you to put the ","
Hi Christiaan I like your nonsense creature its funny you added a creeper face on it and human feet and the eyes moveing every where. Slaine.G
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